Showing posts with label short story. Show all posts
Showing posts with label short story. Show all posts

Saturday, August 22, 2009

School Days- A Short Story

School Days

By Carole Shukle

Word Count: 1077

Copyright 1998


Anne’s Mother was worried about her daughter’s first day in the first grade in a French public school. She and her husband had put their son into the American school on the military base because he had not survived French school. It was Anne’s turn to try and learn the French language.


“Mommie, my first day at school was horrible.” Anne sobbed. “I had to stay after school and write sentences on the blackboard. ”


“Oh, Honey, I’m so sorry.” She pulled Anne into her arms. “What happened?”


“I don’t know,” she gulped, stretching her small arms over her Mom’s shoulder. “I told the teacher what the kids told me to say. The whole blackboard was covered with my sentences. I had to copy the French sentences from a card the teacher gave me.”


“Tomorrow will be easier, Sweetheart. You’ll see.”


“Please, Mommie, don’t make me go back.”


Barbara worried about her daughter. She busied herself around the house until her husband came home.


“Ed, I’m afraid things did not go well at school today.” She greeted her husband with a kiss and a concerned look on her face.


“What happened?”


“Go upstairs and talk to Anne. She can tell you herself.” Barbara headed for the kitchen to make dinner.


Anne saw her father appear in her doorway dressed in his air force uniform with his jacket folded over his arm. He sat on her bed and laid the jacket across his knees. She always thought he looked so handsome in blue because it matched his eyes.


“I had a hard day at work today, Anne. I understand you had a hard day at school. Do you want to tell me about it?”


“Oh, Daddy, it was just awful. Please don’t make me go back.”


Well, Princess, you tell me all about it, and we’ll see how we can make it better.” He took her hand and listened until she was done.


The next day Anne returned to school. They lived in the small village of Bievres which had a gas station, a bakery, a drug store, a butcher shop, and a general store. Her mother drove her to the school in their big Chrysler. It barely fit the narrow cobblestone lanes. All the French kids marveled at the car, and the ‘gendarme’ had been heard saying, “Quelle bateau!”


Anne felt a little better since she didn’t have to walk to school and listen to the French kids jabbering at her, not understanding a word. She got out at the school which was shaped liked the letter ‘U’. One of the wings was for the boys and the other for the girls. The connecting portion of the ‘U’ housed the principal’s office and the bathrooms. High stone walls surrounded the school on three sides, and the side directly in front of the school was a wrought iron fence and gate. The inside of the ‘U” was the play-yard.


Anne’s second day at school did not start off well. Things were still very primitive at Bievres in 1952. Each desk looked like the old fashioned desks of the 1930’s in America, with round holes cut out to hold the ceramic inkwells, a groove cut to hold a pen or pencil, and lift-up tops to store paper and books. The desks were bolted to the floor. The children dipped their pens in the ink and used blotters to dry it. All the children had pencil boxes, mostly made of wood. These boxes were prized by the children who kept on hand several choices of pen points of varying widths.


Anne struggled to write with the pens. The children laughed at her and poked her with their pens causing her to drip ink onto her work. Her second afternoon was spent writing sentences on the board again.


Desperate to learn the language, Anne continued to repeat to the teacher what the children were telling her, hoping she would eventually make some friends.


One day at recess, some the children were juggling balls in the air. Others were bouncing two and three balls off the walls. Anne learned this game quickly. Some of the children knocked the ball out of her hand and shouted, “Riche, Americaine!” She ran off crying. Embarrassed, she ran into the bathroom. There were no stalls for privacy. Two raised, foot-shaped platforms straddled a hole. She remembered how her mouth fell open in disgust the first time she saw these bathrooms as she watched the other children squat over the hole. She swore, then, she would hold until she got home and she did and had every day since then.


That night she thought about what the children had called her and managed to figure out its meaning, too. She developed a plan.


The next day after school, she motioned for her classmates to follow her to a store in the village located just across the street from the school. She walked slowly but purposely whispering to herself, “So they think I’m a rich American.”


The children followed out of curiosity. Some of the children again shouted, “Riche, Americaine!” Anne walked into the general store where her father had an account. She was followed by 10 classmates. They all stood around looking uncomfortable, shuffling their feet, and shrugging their shoulders as if to say, “What is going on here? What is she doing?”


Anne walked up to the owner and smiled. She marched proudly to the counter and pointed to several styles of leather pencil cases. She put up her fingers for the count of ten. The owner looked surprised but proceeded to place the pencil cases on the glass counter. The owner knew she was the daughter of the American Officer who lived on ‘Rue Du Loup Pendu’. They were the only Americans in the village.

Anne gathered the cases in her arms and handed each child a pencil case. The children grinned and laughed and patted her on the back. She heard them say, “Merci, Anne . . . Merci beaucoup.”


The next day at school Anne found her tormentors had become her friends. She smiled as the children gathered around her to thank her once again. Her smile vanished momentarily as she pondered the consequences of her actions. She whispered to herself, “That spanking I’m gonna get from Daddy will be worth it. I wonder how long it will take him to find out?”

Monday, July 27, 2009

Lottery Blues - A Story with a Moral.

Lottery Blues

By Carole Shukle

Copyright 1999

Word Count: 945


Valerie, the cat, was a blue point Himalayan with long, silky fur, and she had a tail like a fat feather. She was most proud of her tail.


Her best friend, George, believe it or not, was a chocolate Labrador retriever. His coat was sleek and close to his body, showing off his muscular physique. Even though they were very different, they cared about and supported each other. They even shared an apartment.


One day they decided to purchase lottery tickets together, hoping for untold riches.


“George, what will you do with your money, if we win?” said Valerie, looking deep into his brown eyes.


“Oh, I will donate 10 % to my church and another 10% to my favorite charity, the humane society for people.” George placed his paw to his chin and rubbed it, continuing to think. “I will use the rest to do good works throughout the land.”


Valerie rubbed against him sweeping him with her beautiful tail. “Aren’t you going to do anything for yourself?”


“Sure I am,” he stated. “By doing good for others, I’m doing something for myself.”


“I’ll try to imagine it,” Valerie purred, tossing her head to one side and rolling her blue eyes.


“What about you, Valerie? What will you do with the money?” George wagged his tail and cocked his head listening very intently.


“Oh, the first thing I will do is quit my job at the boutique. One can’t be rich and work a middle class job--it just wouldn’t be appropriate.” Valerie wrapped her luxurious tail about her like a stole, peeking through the fur at George. “Then I would buy a new house in a fancy neighborhood. I would have a pool and lovely gardens. I would buy a Porsche convertible, too. After that, I would travel the world and buy several places, so I could travel, following the seasons. I would spend my time striving to become a famous writer.”


“Won’t you be lonely without your friends?” George looked sad, his ears drooping at the thought of losing his best friend.


“I will make many new friends in my travels, and, of course, my fans will be my friends.”

Valerie stared into space, imagining her fans surrounding her with love and praise. Suddenly, she focused back to the present, noticing George’s forlorn look. “Of course, George, you will be able to visit me anytime you would like--I would never forget you,” she said, placing her paw under his chin and smiling at him.


Wagging his tail, George took comfort in the words of his best friend.


Two days later the two best friends were sitting in front of the television listening to the lottery drawing. “6.”


“We’ve have a six, George.”


“22.”


George yelped jumping up from the couch, “We’ve got a 22, too.”


They both looked at each other in total disbelief.


“30.”


“My God, my God,” they screamed at the same time.


“49.”


“I think I’m gonna faint, George,” Valerie slipped from the stool in front of George, slumping to the floor, taking deep breaths.


“13.”


Stunned silence. George and Valerie crept into each others arms.


“And, 4.”


Deep howls and high pitched meows erupted from George and Valerie. They rose slowly and started jumping up and down, hugging, and licking each other. They could not believe it; they had won.


They faintly heard the words of the lady on the T.V. set, “This week’s lottery is worth 20 million dollars.”


George and Valerie stared at one another. A few seconds lapsed as the words sunk in.

They both shouted at the same time, “ Ten million dollars each!”


They ran for the kitchen, hunted for that bottle of champagne they kept for special occasions, and babbled plans to each other as they opened the champagne.


Three years later many things had changed in the lives of George and Valerie.


Valerie moved around the world finding inspiration to write from her four beautiful locations: Florida, Alaska, Paris, and Australia. One year ago, she had a bestseller and fame came to her quickly.


Often, while watching television, George spotted Valerie draped in fantastic fake furs, with diamonds sparkling on her toes, her silky tail fluttering coyly like a Chinese fan. Fans would rush her, grabbing at her, tearing her clothes and pulling her fur. Often, she would not sign autographs due to fear of being crushed. She would hide away in her lovely homes. She was very lonely, afraid of having a relationship, for fear she would only be loved because of her wealth.


George, on the other hand, had stayed in their old apartment. He had quit his job at the factory, so he could work on his many charities. He was happy giving to others, but he too was lonely. People constantly came to him begging and harassing him for money. They were not interested in him as a dog, nor did they want to get to know him. They just wanted his money. So, he began to work behind the scenes of his charities, to avoid dealing with greed.


He had not seen Valerie in three years and rarely spoke to her. He decided it was time to change that.


“Hello, Valerie, is that you?”


“George, oh how I’ve longed for your voice and your company. I have missed you terribly,” she purred contentedly into the phone.


George’s tail wagged in his excitement. “Valerie, can I come to see you?”


“Of course, George,” she said, happily nuzzling the phone.


They lived happily ever after, for George proposed to Valerie as soon as he saw her. Valerie, of course, accepted.


Moral: Money cannot make you happy....but it helps, hehehehe!

Friday, July 10, 2009

Short Story - The Horsehair Brush-Posting #1

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I wanted to throw in some other writing I have done just to change things up a bit. This short story has not been published nor has it ever been submitted. I actually wrote it for a writing course I took. It is a bit different and maybe even a little strange. I would like some honest critiquing and responses to it, if you are so inclined. :)

I plan to present it in sections....kind of like a serial story.....as it is about 19 type written pages.
I hope you stick with me and complete this short story.

Posting #1



Carole Shukle

Copyright 1999

The Horsehair Brush

Peggy, exhausted from waiting tables at Mario’s, kicks off her shoes and wiggles her toes as she sits down at her computer to check her E-mail. She looks for a response to the resume she faxed to a prospective employer yesterday. Smiling and leaning back in her chair with her arms raised above her, she stretches to her full length, letting the sensation of relief run through her body. She began to read the emails.

October 3


Dear Peggy,

My name is Granger. After reading your resume and seeing that you have a college degree, I feel that you are qualified for the position I’m offering. I’m looking for an assistant to help me with my work. The pay is good. I need someone who is able to commit to this job for at least a year. Please write if you want more information.

Sincerely,

Granger


Peggy pushes herself away from the computer and stares at the screen wondering what to do. This guy could be some kind of kook. Serial killers flash through her

head like snapshots. Come on, don’t let your imagination get the best of you.


October 4


Granger,

I must say that your letter intrigues me. Right now, I’m working as a waitress. I only recently moved to this area, so I need a good paying job. I’m available for a period of a year. Please give me the job description.

Peggy


October 5


Peggy,

I’m a writer and need a lot of research done. The job would also include other duties. You will basically be making my life easier. There is no point in discussing more details until we have met. I would like you to come for an interview at my apartment tomorrow at 1:00. If you’re interested, I’ll give you my address.


Granger


His apartment? Why not an office? Something is strange here. Peggy wonders why Granger won’t give her all the information now. It’s like “pulling teeth” talking to this guy. I can be stubborn. too. The delicate bone structure of her face is visible beneath her translucent skin. The pulse at her temple beats faster.


October 7


Granger,

I would like to know more about the job, before I commit to an interview. How much is the pay? I feel a little uncomfortable interviewing at your apartment, a neutral location would be better.

Peggy


October 8


Peggy,

The pay is twenty-thousand for a year commitment. We are interviewing at my apartment, because I never leave the apartment. If you are interested in this job, you will need to trust me about this. The address is 1009 Trench Boulevard, Apt. 404. Come at 1:00.

Granger


At twenty-three and one year out of college, Peggy nervously ponders her situation. He never leaves his apartment? Wonder what he means by that? Maybe he is handicapped or something. Twenty-thousand dollars sounds like the bank of Ft. Knox to me. A college degree is supposed to guarantee me more out of life than a foot breaking job and a roach infested room. Maybe I should consider taking this job, even if it sounds a little strange. Besides, I’m a big girl and can take care of myself.