Burn-out
Copyright 1999
This old dwelling,
withstood the erosion
of time, the fury of the elements,
and the thousands of souls
who walked through my portals.
Hardwood, heavy beams,
and loving construction
made me strong and durable.
Tongue and groove
construction gave me strength.
Large windows captured
the light. Slow waltzing shadows
played across my wood plank floors.
This old house lit ebony
skies with bright
orange-red flames,
that licked tasty wood
and turned white to charcoal.
Angular buttresses
jutted from the ground
like broken wooden teeth.
An ancient chandelier
lay half buried in the debris
reminiscent of grander times.
In the shambles,
A broken wardrobe mirror
spun spider-web lines capturing
multiple reflections of myself,
but I recognized
none of them. Like a phoenix
rising from the ashes,
I stepped into oblivion.
*Published in WordWrights! , Spring Issue for 1999.
This was written about my decision to quit teaching after 22 years.
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Wow, 22 years of teaching. Thank you! Teachers are the best.
ReplyDeleteI am enjoying your poetry. Your "Bonding" poem is impressive!
Thank you very much, Juana:)
ReplyDeleteWonderful Carole, What did you teach?
ReplyDeleteI taught high school English most of my career, but I was also a Dean at the high school for over 5 years and for a short time I taught 7-9th grade English and French.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Marlene.
Very pretty. And I can relate - I quit engineering after 15 yrs. Thank you for your nice comments on my blog!
ReplyDeleteYou are welcome, DEB. :) I am glad you could relate. That is very important for me when I write my poetry.
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful. Such feelings of strength and of a new journey.
ReplyDeleteNot English, as you can tell I am southern and slaughter the english language..
LOL.
Thank you for your comments on my blog.
Katelen
Very nice, Carole - I am glad you are sharing your poety!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Carole, I love poetry! Wow I didn't know you were a teacher!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Pam. :) I thought you knew.LOL
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